TURTLE PROBLEM
One fine afternoon on a Friday, a tiny turtle called tiny was crossing a highway near the park. In the park, there was a pond where his family lives. It was peaceful on the highway, no cars were going by. The only sound he could hear were children laughing with joy.
While crossing the highway, he didn’t know a car was coming. Tiny was hit in the shell by the right Tyre. The poor turtle was tumbling down a small cliff. Tiny turtle was upside down after that tumble. Tiny didn't know how to get up, but suddenly he had an idea. With all his strength, he was twisting and turning but he still couldn't get up.
Tiny tried and tried for half an hour. He was so tired he couldn't move a single muscle. It’s like Tiny was paralised by the look of it. He was looking at the light blue sky that was as blue as the ocean water and snow like clouds. Tiny rested for 5 minutes until he had enough energy to twist and turn again. Tiny twisted a lot and turned. After another 5 minutes he got up. He ran slowly with joy and wonderful thoughts of stories to tell his children.
I am a blue level because my narrative has an: Introduction, a Problem & a Solution in Paragraphs, including great word choices.
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