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Tuesday, December 15, 2020

SLJ, False Teeth Task

This week, our teachers let us watch a short film of to friends fishing, there was no sound so we had to write on a comic template to see what people would say if they talked.


 

1 comment:

  1. Kia Ora JF,

    My name is Shannon, and I’m from the Summer Learning Journey.

    I really like your comic! I like how you’ve explained how the man lost his teeth in the first place! That’s super important so your readers can easily follow your comic! Well done! I definitely wouldn’t put fishy teeth back into my mouth! Would you? I also like how at the end, the man looks offended that the other has taken his teeth. You’ve utilised the facial expressions in the last frame very well.

    If you could write a comic on anything, what would you write about? I think I’d write about space adventures and rocket ships, not fishy teeth, though it is pretty funny.

    Good job on starting the Summer Learning Journey, I look forward to seeing all your future blog posts! What activities are you most excited for?

    Ka kite anō,
    Shannon (SLJ)

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